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I have posted the Thursday post critiques in – a flash fiction is there- please tell me if it is acceptable as flash fiction or not! be honest πŸ™‚

I am trying my hands on flash fiction, will love it if you love them too! if no then tell me, I will try to improve.


15 thoughts on “the thursday post critiques-story of this week is-up-in-etherealpaints-wordpress-com

  1. Nice blog! Will be glad to follow you and post a suggestion of mine as well, hope you’ll like it, I usually post it at any blog/site I like:
    Do you use sites like, cafepress. com, fiverr? They could be a good way to show your works and to help “remove” stupidity in the streets like headlines on t-shirts, fridge-magnets, cups, etc: My Boyfriend kisses Better Than Yours, FBI – female body inspector, etc. Not everything we see and think of should be about sex, right? It would be much better if there were more nice pictures (even of mythical creatures), good thoughts, poems (from any genre are welcome I guess), etc? I’m allanbard there, I use some of my illustrations, thoughts, poems from my books (like: One can fight money only with money, Even in the hottest fire there’s a bit of water, Money are amongst the last things that make people rich, or
    Let’s watch the moon, let’s meet the sun!
    Let’s hear soon the way the Deed was done!
    Let’s listen to the music the shiny crystals played,
    let’s welcome crowds of creatures good and great…
    etc). I guess such lines are much better than those we see every day? Best wishes! Let the wonderful noise of the sea always sounds in your ears! (a greeting of the water dragons’ hunters – my Tale Of The Rock Pieces).

    • what are these sites you referred to? will I have to open a blog there like I have too many here? have you seen my list of blogs? or is it something else? I don’t have faintest idea about these sites.

      thanks for the suggestions!!! every suggestion is a favour.

  2. Honestly, it flashes as a flash with plenty of suspense left for readers to speculate. How come I am not getting your posts in my regular mails even though I have been following you for a long time? This comment I am giving out of the list of my followers as ‘Reader’

    • that is an old habit of wordpress i guess! it does not updates posts properly. I have never picked up the habit of going through their “the blogs i read” page, i have very few friends so i just check them out directly. but with my latest style of blogging that will be difficult so I hope that they will send the posts to the readers πŸ™‚

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